Blank-Mage's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SMB GT TGA Intro]

Hey Shadow, you're still improving. (Looking forward to Shift, that preview was fantastic.) Not a huge fan of the music choice, but that's only because I'm picky and have no idea what series that's from.

[Nyan Caxx]

Well... didn't see that coming.

I was all like, Nyan Cat, haha, what fun times I- hey, a Malboro, that's kinda, is that the cube from Hellraiser? What's... GAH-

The nine is because I would have liked a scene select, so I could relive the horror without the Nyan. Other than that, solid.

[The Real Legend 4]

Your animations are fantastic as always.

Although some of the jokes were a little forced.

Also, where did you find that awesome remix theme you used for the credits?

[Mario Vs Kirby!]

Well.

On the bright side, as far as wasting time goes, this was wonderfully short.

[Sonic Vs Shadow DBZ fight]

Not bad for a start.

It was a bit generic but surprisingly well thought out. It wasn't great, but everyone sucks a bit while they figure things out. Trust me, mine was terrible. Here's what I would improve.

1. Frame size. 400 by 550 is the standard, you should try to keep it there.
2. Backgrounds. You had some painful jumps, try to keep it looped in a way no one notices.
3. Teleporting. I have no idea why everyone thinks Sonic can teleport and fly. Or just ignore gravity, as the case may be. I mean, c'mon.

Still, it's a good start to your spriting career. Good luck, kid, you're gonna need it.

[Sonic VS Meta Knight P2]

Ah, comon.

I know you said you were trimming the filesize, but that was 5 megs for about 30 seconds. And of those 30 seconds, very little actually happened. Meta hits Sonic, Shadow hits Meta, Kirby hits Shadow, Sonic goes super, meta goes super. The end. Really? At least have them fight or something, eh?

GuitarKirby responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I can't say I'm fond of your review, but then again, yu were right on all counts. I'm not exactly a master of filesize trim, and it's the thing I have the most trouble with. As for not much actually happening... Well, I did try, but you make good points. Not much did happen, and hopefully, I can make lots happen next time. I'm sorry I couldn't be a bit more impressive on this flash.

[8-Bit Dr. Horrible Act 1]

Yeeeeeees.

If you follow up on this and make an actual game, I will upvote it every day for a month.